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Post by stanzi on Aug 14, 2011 13:19:13 GMT -5
;D ;D ok here we go.....the following is it is the first DRAFT ;D of what I hear but some lines/words are not very clear to me so I ask for your help (expecially mothertongue members pleease ). Please be free to suggest/change the below: na..na..na na na.na...naa na na na na……..x 4 See something batch your state of mind Whenever you think your love is just left behind Step back with that protection on Think you can fight this on your own Don’t you know they front you up yeah Let’s shoot a visible target x 4 na..na..na na..naa na na na…….. Just stand a kind of movie show when they get you down you’ll be the first one to know you can’t agree on battle crime you’ll share a listen up and stand I’ll be up around and round Let’s shoot a visible target x 4 Now you’ve beaten up no longer yeah ( not sure about this line) no-one said you’d have to play the game Now you’ve beaten up no longer yeah no-one said you’d have to play the play/pay (??) beautiful solo guitar ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Dizzylizzy on Aug 14, 2011 14:32:26 GMT -5
Stefy, I'm gonna tell you what I hear differently. But it's not all clear to me either.
seen something about your state of mind
Let’s shoot your visible target
Just ? a kind of movie show
you should (h)a(ve) listened up and stand.
Now you’ve beaten up the wrong guy (not sure either)
no-one said you had to play that way
Elaine, where are you?! ;D
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Post by stanzi on Aug 14, 2011 14:49:02 GMT -5
Stefy, I'm gonna tell you what I hear differently. But it's not all clear to me either. seen something about your state of mind Let’s shoot your visible target Just ? a kind of movie show you should (h)a(ve) listened up and stand. Now you’ve beaten up the wrong guy (not sure either) no-one said you had to play that wayElaine, where are you?! ;D THANKS Liesbet...I love this kind of collaboration ;D let me put this together, you might be right........is you hubby Geordie? ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Dizzylizzy on Aug 14, 2011 14:58:21 GMT -5
THANKS Liesbet...I love this kind of collaboration ;D let me put this together, you might be right........is you hubby Geordie? ;D ;D ;D Wait for the native-speakers' verdict before you thank me. No, no Geordies in the family I'm afraid. ;D
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Post by stanzi on Aug 14, 2011 15:05:53 GMT -5
THANKS Liesbet...I love this kind of collaboration ;D let me put this together, you might be right........is you hubby Geordie? ;D ;D ;D Wait for the native-speakers' verdict before you thank me. No, no Geordies in the family I'm afraid. ;D NOOO BINGO!!! It works!! well done!!! I will re-write it with your corrections!!!
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Post by stanzi on Aug 14, 2011 15:13:16 GMT -5
2nd DRAFT (waiting for the English mother tongue members's final version ;D)
na..na..na na na.na...naa na na na na……..x 4
See something about your state of mind whenever you think your love is just left behind Step back with that protection on Think you can fight this on your own Don’t you know they front you up yeah
Let’s shoot your/a visible target x 4
na..na..na na..naa na na na……..
just stand a kind of movie show when they get you down you’ll be the first one to know you can’t agree on battle crime you should have listened up and stand I’ll be up around and round
Let’s shoot a visible target x 4
Now you’ve beaten up the wrong guy yeah no-one said you’d have to play the game
Now you’ve beaten up no longer yeah no-one said you’d have to play that way
beautiful solo guitar ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Dizzylizzy on Aug 14, 2011 17:25:02 GMT -5
I like the song more and more every time I listen. Well, it was about time, Andy would say. ;D
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Post by stanzi on Aug 14, 2011 17:48:53 GMT -5
I like the song more and more every time I listen. Well, it was about time, Andy would say. ;D me too!!!! ;D noo Andy would say: "it was about the f***** time!!! ;D I LOVE IT!!!!
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Post by stanzi on Aug 17, 2011 8:02:03 GMT -5
LITTLE CORRECTION (MAYBE) Let's shoot OUR Visible Target...... it does sound correct....
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Post by Miss Elaine on Aug 24, 2011 0:50:08 GMT -5
Seriously, there should be a Rosetta Stone and Babel Fish Translator for Geordie. na..na..na na na.na...naa na na na na……..x 4 Say something about your state of mind when everything you love is just left behind Step back without protection on Think you can fight this on your own Don’t you know they front you up yeah They'll shoot your're a visible target x 4 na..na..na na..naa na na na…….. just in a kind of movie show when they get you down you’ll be the first to know you'll let them bleed on by the crime you should have listened up instead of being out there running round They'll shoot you're a visible target x 4 Now you’re beatin' up the wrong guy yeah no-one said you’d have to play their game Now you’re beating up the wrong guy yeah no-one said you’d have to play that way They'll shoot... Let me tell ya (I love that 2nd voice, it makes me happy! ) (Love the guitar, too! )
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Post by Dizzylizzy on Aug 24, 2011 1:54:14 GMT -5
Seriously, there should be a Rosetta Stone and Babel Fish Translator for Geordie. ;D Elaine, our Saviour! ;D So the chorus consists of 2 sentences instead of 1. You're instead of your. And it's 'they' ... THANK YOU!
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Post by stanzi on Aug 24, 2011 14:46:48 GMT -5
Seriously, there should be a Rosetta Stone and Babel Fish Translator for Geordie. ;D ;D ;D ;D THANKS VERY MUCH ELAINE!!!
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Post by stanzi on Aug 25, 2011 13:56:36 GMT -5
OK, I love this song sooo much I want to cry in chinese ;D ;D ;D
I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE:
The guitar in the backgroung while singing "nanananan"
HIS VOICE ;D
he has such a beautiful sexy voice I want to cry in bloody Thailandese
UAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Thundergirl on Aug 31, 2011 9:39:31 GMT -5
:)Thank you girls! Beautiful great song, voice, guitar and lyrics!
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Post by stanzi on Aug 31, 2011 9:46:36 GMT -5
:)Thank you girls! Beautiful great song, voice, guitar and lyrics! and SINGER!!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D
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